All Comments on 'Terror at Ravenwoode'

An excellent begining if you should wish to continue with the storyline. You might want to make it a little more detailed. Keep it up.

Joel

Hiya KirkB,

just finished reading your story and it was very cool. I love all that manga/tentacle stuff. The only down side of it all was the lack of descripition when describing what was happening to the women when they were getting attacked. Make it juicey and descriptive. Your writing flowed well and the story line was nicely played out. I look forward to reading more of your work if you continue to write, which i hope you do.

Nice one!!!

I can see how this would be a hard story to continue: all the fun stuff is done and now there's nothing but plot development and conclusion. Is there another character you could introduce as a Nemesis?

maybe there is a succubus in a male school... an alteration but still with different avenues, different ways to have sex...

Plenty of room to carry this one forward. You have the rest of the school, the terror can spread into the surrounding community or other schools...

Loved it and please continue doing the story and add dark detail of the demon screwing the girls.So please don't stop!!!!!

This was so freakin kickass!! i loved the suspense it gave me! Please tell me you will make more to this storyline! You can email me at MissJazzinnaJinxenna@hotmail.com if you to message me.^-^

More, More,MORE

Please?

How have you not continued this, its a great story tho i wish there were a few more details in the raping scenes

This is fantastic. Is there more to the story coming?