All Comments on 'Terry Finds His Talent'

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Edward1970Edward1970over 3 years ago

Good start! Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good beginning

I see a lot of potential in where you can go with this story line. Like the start of this story. Hope to see more.

HankDolworthHankDolworthover 3 years ago

Keep it going. You got a good start, flesh it out. How does his power work? What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

This could be interesting. More please. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More importantly, will there be any canned ham or niblet corn in this story?

rogerpyrerogerpyreover 3 years ago

Certainly a good intro if the intent here is a series. I would be excited to see how he uses his power further, if there is some explanation for it, and how it will potentially change him!

PandelusionPandelusionover 3 years ago

Cant wait to see if theres more! but please include a cost to his powers, or maybe he gets in trouble with it or something?

Magic12345mtgMagic12345mtgover 3 years ago
Nice

Can't wait to see more

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