All Comments on 'Testing Daddy'

WOW!! Great start... I wished it was longer, or perhaps a Ch. 2 ... and more!

I gave this one a rating of 3. She like needs a better description of her tits. Small, but are thy perky possibly upturned. Her nipples, what color (light pink, pink, burgundy, brown, and are they long, thin, thick? Her pussy hair, a thick and abundant bush, even if trimmed would have probably gotten you a rating higher than 3. Needs more chapters.

starts off good then ends abruptly

A little bit short. I will look for more of your stories in the future.

gppd start nad ...

Thanks for sharing your work!