All Comments on 'Tethered... Ch. 01'

Amazingly well-written. You're an extremely gifted writer!

Kept me hooked all the way through. Your ability to describe the action, along with the...feelings...made it that much more enjoyable. As a reader, you could fall into the story with ease and see everything in your mind. VERY WELL DONE INDEED!!

I absolutely adore this piece. It's very well executed, and had me going into sensory overload. The images Tethered evoked surprised me, purely because, as a female, I could quite easily slip into the mindset of the male captive without rebelling. This story is simply delicious. Well done!

Not really my cup of tea but I will read chapter 2 later just to make sure im giving this story a fair chance.......