All Comments on 'Texting Turns to Sexting Ch. 03'

stop saying 'oh my god' so much

otherwise, good

Agree with other person. The oh my god comments are annoying, otherwise it’s a good story

This is going to be a very good story when you finish it! The lucky fella gets to play with two women now! Can't get much better than that! I'm assuming that lucky fella is you!

The ‘Oh my god’ is based on a lady I know who actually talks this way. It’s a bit of a flaw, I know. But she said I could use it in my story. And, by the way, she really does have pink, pointy nipples that are constantly erect.