All Comments on 'Thank You Ch. 3'

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LonelyMomLonelyMomalmost 17 years ago
Bravo!

I loved this incredibly erotic tale told by a very talented writer. The way that you describe the emotions that the woman goes through while allowing herself to give into her sexual nature was very powerful. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wonderful Story

I really enjoyed your story. Have had a secert desire for years to have an African Exchange Student living in our home. I don't find many stories with this theme and am grateful I found yours. Look forward to reading more of your writings. Thanks barbara

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Absolutely awful

Dreadfully over-written. The author seems to think that literary quality is achieved by using several adjectives where on would suffice. Garbage.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Jewel

Twelve inch black jewel between his legs. With as many stories as you have written, you still barely approach an eighth grade level. Even this must tax the comprehension of your audience.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
She doesn't deserve her husband

While the famous surgeon is off saving lives, she can't be faithful for four days. I hope he finds out how disgusting she is and kicks her to the curb. Should make for some great press. She will be a pariah in her home town.

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