All Comments on 'Thank You, My Pretend Ex-Lover Ch. 01'

But imaginative, and I thought it was well written for what it was -- an erotic flash.

An interesting first story, and I hope there will be more.

Lue

Hi folks,

I want to let you know that I requested to edit this submission. I originally published this story on another site in 2 parts. This submission will include both parts in a couple of days.

xo, Claire