All Comments on 'Thanks Flinder!'

A good fucking story, but difficult to read because of the length of your paragraphs. Reading long paragraphs is a pain and takes away from the enjoyment of the story There are.no rules about paragraph length, so make them shorter and you'll get better reviews.

I really liked this story, but “size queen” has nothing to do with women and everything to do with gay men who like to have sex with men with above average penises.

There are also some spelling and grammar mistakes that can be fixed by taking a second look at the text.

I agree with the above comment as well, the paragraphs are really long and should be split whenever you are both talking.

Size queen is man OR woman. It can be debated whether it started with gay men or women but the term applies to both. Research it.