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Click hereThe cold water was initially a shock, but it was just like ripping off a band aid. Once you were in, you had it licked. It was less than 5 minutes later when a sedan pulled up and two college age couples climbed out. The two girls observed Jason swimming in the water with the outdoor temperature still hovering in the lower 50s even though it was about 2:00 in the afternoon, the warmest part of the day. As the girls gawked at Jason, he decided to up the stakes by yelling, "Come on in! The water is fine!"
After some jibes from the young ladies, their two boyfriends were not about to be outdone by some 14 year old Junior High School brat. They stripped down to their boxers and approached the rope swing. Jason grabbed the painter for the rope swing, climbed out on shore, and swung out over the water once again, dropping about 15 feet into the water from the top of the arc. One of the college boys immediately snagged the rope as it swung back.
He took a good running leap to show that he could swing out further than the kid. He caught plenty of air time before plunging into the ice cold water. He was already yelling and screaming his guts out before he broke the surface of the water. Jason was amazed at just how close the young man came to recreating Jesus of Nazareth walking upon the surface of the water in his effort to escape the icy clutches of the Blue Hole.
His friend had followed immediately in his wake and was just releasing the rope when his buddy had surfaced screaming. He fared no better, turning the air blue with his cursing. Jason laughed and splashed around some more and yelled, "Chickens!" at the two young men whose skin tone now matched the blue water of the swimming hole. They gathered their clothes and their girlfriends, bundling them all into the car as quickly as possible and drove away.
Jason climbed out onto the bank to the cheers and laughter of the Assistant Scout Master and the rest of the Beaver Patrol. The story became a legend handed down at many a campfire. Everyone always speculated on how much longer those two relationships had lasted after the two guys had been humiliated so badly.
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Jason and the girls swam around in the lake for almost two hours before returning to their campsite. Jason started up the campfire using a magnifying glass and sunlight to ignite his tender. They had 'strike anywhere' matches in their 'dry box' of supplies, but Jason liked to be a show off proving that he could successfully light a fire without the aid of modern conveniences like that. The campfire would be for making S'mores later that night for desert. But its immediate purpose would be for heating the water used for dish washing.
Back when Jason was about 8 years old and in Cub Scouts, his dad had seen photos of a pot designed to heat water for wilderness camping. It was designed in such a way that a coil of copper tubing placed within a very small fire could heat the water. But it was just as effective if the coil was placed over a larger heat source as well.
After checking with several restaurant kitchens, Dad had located a 20 gallon stainless steel pot that an owner was ready to part ways with for a reasonable sum of $10.00. Drilling two holes in the side, one about 3 inches down from the rim and another about an inch from the bottom and directly below the first hole. He created the copper coil by wrapping the tubing around a one gallon glass mayonnaise jar. Using brass fittings, he rolled the end of the tubing into the fitting for a water tight fit and attached the coil to the upper and lower holes. When filled with water and a heat source applied to the coils, the natural convection of the hot water rising in the coil caused circulation heating all of the water with the pot sitting beside instead of directly over the flames.
The girls busied themselves with firing up the Coleman® Gasoline Stove and heating up the Beef Stew that had been purchased for that evening's meal. Jason went down to the creek and retrieved the watermelon. He helped Melanie slice it up as Jessica tended to the stove. The cold melon would suffice as a fruit salad to start out tonight's dinner.
After dinner, the three gathered around their campfire and used unfolded wire coat hangers to roast marshmallows for S'mores. It was standard operating procedure to ensure that plenty of Graham Crackers, Milk Chocolate Bars, and Marshmallows were kept on hand for dessert. Jason allowed the fire to burn itself down to just coals. The fire-pit was well contained and the weather had been wet for the previous month, so there was no danger in just letting it die on its own.
The dishes were gathered up and the three worked as a team. Three separate wash basins had been set up. The first contained scalding hot water with liquid dish soap added. The next had lukewarm water with a cap full of chlorine bleach added to it. The third had just plain cold water. Melanie assumed the washing duty at the first station. Jessica took on the sterilizing and rinsing at the next. Jason stood at the end and retrieved the wet dishes from the cold water station, drying them before putting them away in the chuck box nearby.
Everything was shipshape in less than 15 minutes, so they turned off the Coleman® Lanterns and headed for bed. As they all gathered in their tent, Jessica approached her brother.
"Hey babe...can I ask you for a HUGE favor?"
"Sure, sis. What's up?"
"Okay, so my plans were for me and Mel to both fuck your brains out tonight. But I screwed up. I didn't realize just how full of a day that we would have today. Trust me, I really, really want to make love to you right now, but I'm just too damned tired."
Jason bent down and passionately kissed his sister. "Sure, Babe. It's all good," he replied. "I would rather that all three of us be rested and in the right mood so that we can enjoy our first time together and make it a true memory." Melanie stepped up to the siblings and they both kissed her passionately as well.
"In my humble opinion," Melanie intoned, "I think that all three of us (a) stayed up way too late last night and (b) had a full day today. I'm totally bushed too."
And so it was that on the night of July 5th, Melanie and Jessica both remained technically virgins. The three lovers climbed into their camp bed, cuddled up close and fell asleep in each other's arms.
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Appendix C
The conductor's voice came over the public address system expounding on trivia and facts for the benefit of the passengers on board that day.
"The railroad between Rusk and Palestine crosses over a total of 24 bridges that span the creeks flowing through the forest. At the point where the railroad crosses the Neches River, it passes close to where Duty Crossing once existed. This location on the Neches River had been named for Richard Duty, one of the early East Texas settlers.
"Before 1848, Native Americans and early Anglo settlers forded the river here. After that, the Ben Cannon Ferry crossed the Neches River near here from 1848 to 1851. Later on, a toll bridge operated at this same site for some 70 odd years, from 1854 to 1924. Today, the Neches River crossing is the largest bridge on the railroad line. It was washed out during the 1970s, but rebuilt by the Texas State Parks & Wildlife Department out of concrete. It's current total dimensions are 1,042 feet long and 35 feet high.
"During the period of the washout, the railroad still operated two trains. The Rusk train used the turntable located at Maydelle to turn its locomotive. A 'Wye' track was constructed just west of the Neches River for turning the Palestine locomotives. Those two additions to the railroad are still maintained in good operating condition and still see occasional use even today. The wye is still used on the 'Polar Express' trains run during the Christmas season. Come back and ride with us this fall! Everyone gets all of the free hot cocoa you can drink!"
I hope that you like that I included this little extra bit of story here in the appendix and enjoyed it.
Liner Notes
I didn't originally plan to break the action here. But because it has been several months (February-June?) since I released Chapter Two as well as the current length of this installment has exceeded 24,300 words, I made the decision to have your cliffhanger be the build up to the girls losing their virginity. With that being said, Chapter 4 may end up being kind of short with a length similar to that of Chapter 1. I am generally shooting for a minimum of 19,800 words for each installment. 20k will make 6 full Literotica pages plus a piece of a 7th page from what I have been told. That is a good comfortable length for me.
I originally planned on having the girls lose their virginity back to back on the first night at the camp. Then there would be some story line covering the next few weeks leading up to August when school would once again begin at the college campus'. There is plenty to write about with Roel dropping in from time to time, the girls finding jobs to help pay for the needed two-bedroom apartment, and leading up to moving day for the girls with a U-Haul truck. But since things have turned out as they have, we will open up the next installment with Jason taking the girl's innocence the next morning when they wake up. Until next time! -Scottish Texan-
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I know. I have a problem when I am passionate about something I tend to go heavy on the details. I have worked really hard to tone that back a whole lot. Hopefully, it gets better for you as you proceed into the following chapters.
Like the story so far. You do seem to go into information overload at times though. I grew up in NE Texas and spent plenty of time in the Piney Woods region, even taking that railroad trip between Rusk and Palestine. Beautiful scenery. Thanks for helping me relive some memories from my past.
"Jessica Anne Stewart!" Jason roared. "There is a proper time and place for levity and this ain't it, girl!" From the guy that just did a TV show character impression...
Hmm. I'm a little surprised they let you include all the lyrics to "Maybe I'm Wrong". I tried to include all of the lyrics to a song in one of my "Silent Weeks Sequel" stories and they told me I was limited to a certain percentage, so I had to butcher it.
This is my favorite chapter, so far. Jason doesn't annoy me quite as much, anymore.
I think at its core it's a good story with a few issues:
1. Dialogue: the characters don't sound like real people, especially ones of that age. It's more of a cartoon/sitcom feel for me. The Dad jokes contribute to that and the dialogue comes across a bit silly. Then again that's a style choice.
2. Some sections, like the whole pre-flight thing in chp 2, don't seem necessary and I just skip over them. I think for people who are into that they'll love it, but for the rest it just leads to a lot of skipping
3. A lot of sentences feel like they are too long and could be shortened and more to the point.
4. This is more specifically about the story itself. I didn't really like how Jason's acceptance of them being together behind his back went down. Would have been better if they just apologized and explained their plan. Cause like he said, he had no problem with it, it was just the deceit that was an issue. The comedic way it was done with him forgetting about it when he saw them kiss wasn't for me.