All Comments on 'That Girl Next Door Ch. 06b'

At long last!!!

Believe it or not, I submitted this nearly a month ago. Literotica.com kicked it back because I had nurse Bridges marry her boyfriend at age 17, which is legal in Texas. It was a quick fix and I resubmitted the story in less than 12 hours.

It sat languishing in their hands for nearly a month!

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I'm glad that it's finally available for your reading pleasure.

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I hope there is so much more to come. a fantastic story I am enjoying immensely.

Looking forward to the next chapter. One of the best written stories here.

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Still a good story! Glad to see it updated. Wonder why Literotica is slowing down, guess it's getting more popular with more and more artists.

One question, how did you come up with Halona as a name for Jason and Jesse mother? Never heard of it and is curious about it.

5/5*

Amazing¡!!!!!!

Great story, I'm going to lookforward to reading the rest off what you have written.

Good story until you decided to bring Rebecca into their fold. Still 4.5 *

Thank you! Great story. Curious how you're going to put Rebecca into the mix. How "close" is mom going to get, with the girls?

Damned good thing you are continuing it! Can't wait until we see just how far the poly-amorous and polygamous aspects develop. Good job so far; wondering if Roel and Cyn will get roped back into the relationship tighter; maybe Roe can be Jessica's baby daddy, as we KNOW you won't make it Jason's. Looking forward to chapter 7!

Love this storyline! Can't wait for more!!!