All Comments on 'That Time I Banged A Mermaid'

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jonnydoughjonnydoughabout 4 years ago

Maybe the best story I have read on the site. I loved every word, feeling like I was along for the ride the entire time.

CanadianMCanadianMabout 4 years ago
Well Done

Wonderful fantasy story. Enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

You should do a second chapter for this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved it!

Just one technical point, as a New Zealander - glow worms HATE noise, and will immediately switch off their lights if disturbed. This is why visitors to the famous Waitomo caves are told that they must stay silent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can’t wait to see what happens to the characters next.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 2 years ago

I have read a handful of Mermaid stories here on Litrotica buut never read one where 'gill stimulation' was a thing - very creative.

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