All Comments on 'That was Unexpected Pt. 01'
by Swnglf
- 7 Comments
prinnavea5 months agoGood start, keep it going. I saw just a few errors. 1. It is, I, not, i when it comes to self. Use the story text editor when posting, it catches a lot of simple errors, we all make when writing. Just expand the story text with the diag. arrows in the upper right of story text pane.
Will be waiting for pt-02
Hotstuff1P4 months agoWow got it going in the limo. Awesome. Will be interesting to see if Amy will only be fucked by her husband or it gets more out of hand back home. Obviously a full strip tease for the groom and completely naked Amy has to happen......
Wilson Spalding4 months agoIt may have been unexpected, but it was also delightful!
Sure, Mike became Mark and the guys were right out of central casting, but there's a reason the porn tropes work, right? Right. And they work here very well.
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