by Storiest
Excuse me; you left out the confrontation with Kurt.
Kimmy just saying it would be all right. That ruined the story for me.
An unexpected ending. Not sure what to make of it; certainly part 2 improved the story as a whole. There are lots of holes but maybe they don't matter too much. A strange but intriguing tale. Thank you
Hoping two evil people, Kimmy and Darren get some wonderful STD's and kick off soon. Cheating skank slut and piece of shit guy are the worst. Selfish and hateful toward people that love them. No girlfriend reacts the way Anna did and no husband stands by babysitting while his whore wife takes a walk with her scum lover. So, again, the best thing for those around these two pieces of trash would be they fall victim to their own betrayals.
Good writng, real flow to it, but need to hear more about Kim and Kurt's situation.
I actively disliked this, the no remorse from the cheaters, the lack of a confrontation, these 2 adulterers having not a carpe in the world then rushing about to clean up and take care of a just remembered kid. The seeming lack of response from dickwads girlfriend, all this was sour.
this story leaves me with a very unexplainable feeling. I'm definitely not sure I liked it. Almost like watching a foreign film. You like parts but mostly it just feels off.
Ahhh, all the little snookems are upset because their jack off orgasm was ruined when the cheating whore didn’t get burned. Poor babies, just go read some jerk off stuff from CindyTV and you’ll feel better
No Kurt-Kimmy confrontation.... Kurt knew... So, what happened? Did your fingers get tired of typing? The story had potential. Had....
Rating? A generous 2 stars.
Seemed artificial and contrived. Puppets on strings. Wooden and emotionless. There should be some feeling here with the topics covered.