All Comments on 'The 3 'C's' of life Ch. 04'

Nicely done. I’m surprised there wasn’t an even mildly envious coworker of Bev’s in the bar.

The different story series read together are almost a choose your own adventure story for Bill. It’s a lot of fun to read with the various what-ifs.

Minor spell check word replacement.

>It's a sign to me that you've got a big heard and aren't afraid to let me see it.

Should “heard” be “heart”?

Very good. I really like these people the way you portrayed them.