All Comments on 'The ABC Game Ch. 08'

Just when I was wondering if you were stumped on how to keep this story progressing, you took it in a direction that I never saw coming. Great job, and great writing.

Can't wait to see what happens next, and looking forward to reading about daddy's little girl and her naughty streak. I'm also hoping that Mr Roberts will find a suitable way to punish his wife for her transgressions. Earlier in the storyline, it seemed that she was just a wife looking to spice things up in her marriage, but then you took her motivations down a darker path. Maybe the move to Vegas will be the right time to thoroughly dominate this cunning woman? The girls might enjoy breaking her.

Just blew a work day reading these stories and, despite a couple of goofy errors, they are great! Really looking forward to the ongoing saga - plenty still to tell here and I hope you're willing to keep us going :)

Thanks and we're all waiting :)