All Comments on 'The Actor Ep. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the series, and loved how you chose to end the story! Jake and Jamie are so happy together, and the image of them naked, with her breasts pressed against the muscled hairy chest, is so special. They have a great life ahead of them. See how things work our for those who are loving, generous, and live right? Thanks for writing this loving story!

ArkSoutherngentArkSoutherngentover 1 year ago

Last chapter was rushed, otherwise it was a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You wrote the first R-rated Hallmark movie.

ErocratErocratover 1 year ago

With proven libel, just three words: "unlawful termination lawsuit". That messed up my suspension of disbelief. Otherwise engaging and well-written, even if I have to agree the final chapter was a bit rushed. 4/5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

With the last paragraph you have put the finishes to a very entertaining story. Many say it was rushed but it did move along at agood pace without a lot of added fluff. Good writing looking forward to the next story

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