by NYBoss
It was a really nice romance story that got turned into erotic couplings. I think that you should have confidence in the way that you can deliver a romance that you won't have to stack one sex scene on top of another, ;-)
Very good. So nice to read a story where the female lead has a lovely bush and keeps it. Yes it was about people in a financial bracket I could never dream of and yet you made them very likeable.
Heh, not impressed at all. If you're looking for a romance move on. This is more of a fantasy fuckfest.
boring.................. absolutely nothing jumps off the pages that makes go how interesting, or that was exciting or that grabbed my attention even from an erotic moment.........
This story had promise but everything came too easy. Im not saying there should some sort of conflict between them, but perhaps a conflict that they needed to face together. It seemed like an abridged romance novel for men. It's the first story I've read of yours, but had enough promise I'll check out some of the others.
Loved the story. Everyone must remember that this is a fantasy. Yeah, the author is not Hemingway, and there are some issues with grammar, but overall, I did want to fuck Sophie from the very beginning.
Seriously? He's got a PhD and fifty million and he gets a job teaching High School? And the story starts out with him being bored with an education seminar. Lost me right there.