All Comments on 'The Ad Pt. 02'

by Sustainer

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AIMSJETAIMSJETover 3 years ago

Wonderful!! Can't wait for the rest of the story!!! Hot

maddictmaddictover 3 years ago

I don't think anyone can scratch a itch like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hello 5 stars !

Wow, just wow that was so incredibly powerful. Loved the writing technique of ramping up the impact of the Ad all the way through. Very nicely done.

Tess (UK)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous