All Comments on 'The Adventures of Tim Bodge Ch. 06'

I enjoy your story but wish the chapters were longer.

I have to question the authors Indiana location. The writing style feels like Indian Sub continent using an online translator. It’s also a pretty much a direct rip off of Three Square Meals. Tefler should be pissed. Typical literary theft.

The storyline is fine but the writing is full of grammatical errors, verb errors, tense errors, extra words in places which detract from the story. I give it a 4 for the plot but the writing needs some work. Maybe approach a writer for some coaching.

Kind of a copy of Telfer 3 Square Meals..... Don't know how long this will be worthwhile reading... depends on if it changes up soon

chapter 5 is a rewrite of chapter 4