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All Comments on 'The Adventures of Tim Bodge Ch. 19: Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This chapter is... Not great. The grammar is *very* poor, even worse than normal... But even the idea of the chapter is badly executed, with many flaws in the logic. I'm afraid to say this isn't one of your best.

thodge1945thodge1945over 2 years agoAuthor

Well I'll try to do better, just hope you will keep reading. Thank you for taking your time to read my story.

Terry

firewolf54firewolf54over 2 years ago

really like this story not gonna freak over a few mistake in grammar wanting for the next chapter please keep the story going if the grammar police doesn't like it they can write their own story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Terry; methinks the Pirates have absconded with parts II and II of this chapter.

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