All Comments on 'The Adventurous Adventurer'

Really a good start to hopefully allot more adventure.

It was okay but nothing more.

I liked it. Well-written, but it felt a little rushed. You might consider adding more physical descriptive language to flesh things out (pun intended). It was impressive how you established the characters so quickly though! I’d love to see more of them.

So good! He totally needs to fuck her standing while she's wrapped around him. Group sex with the whole party could be hot. Please write more.