All Comments on 'The African Safari'

Spelling or spell check is useless.

Flare Gun

ETC ETC ETC

Sorry but the story was the same.

Thanks for the feedback. I wrote it in a notepad file before pasting it here. So couldn't spell check. By the way what do you mean the story was the same?

This shit has been done to death. Are there any writers who actually think for themselves? 1*

Sorry to disappoint you. But I would love to you see what your work.