All Comments on 'The After Time Pt. 02'

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Feonorx almost 9 years ago

even worse than the first

A good concept ruined by submission of a draft copy at best. Desperately need an editor.

oldwayne about 8 years ago

I still like the story and you have heard enoguh about its technical merit.

I'll keep reading!

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First time writing one of these. Enjoy writing stories which always turn out as novels. Long winded I guess. I am retired from transportation industry. My early works are filled with errors miss spelling and poor paragraph formation. I tend to concentrate on the story more tha...

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