All Comments on 'The All-Father Ch. 01'

This is a good set up for a continuing story. Develop each person's persona. This can be a good story in a post apocalyptic world.

Interesting sci-fi, Waiting to see where this goes.........

I'm confused on how children grown in artificial pods since birth know how to read, speak, and walk. Also they are aware of their own nudity?

you earned a follow.

You can write legibly and have a first page. The tags are intriguing. I must admit that the non-standard spelling of Eleanor as Elanor bugs me, especially since you spelled it standardly the first time. That may say more about me than you though! I'm interested in seeing what you do with it. Hopefully in slightly larger installations.