All Comments on 'The Alley'

I could tell where the story was going when she left the bar, but the Great writing kept me engaged. So much so that the resolution gave me a feeling of relief. 5*

This is what I have been telling you for a while. Your words are always interesting and the story is excellent. I can visualise you with the look of fear as he grabs you, even though you knew it was Daddy.

As always your writing reaches all the right spots