All Comments on 'The Alleyway'

Hoping this will have a continuation

Good Plot but most true stories are! I will give a better grade if you repost it without all the typos. I really like your stories as you know but this had way too many grammatical errors and typos it throws of the thought process some.

Interesting. I enjoyed the story. Thank you. I couldn't place where it was set. You use a number of UK words/phrases (or Brt Commonwealth) like Uni, but then use the the horrible USA spelling of words like "site", when you clearly meant "seeing" which should be spelt "sight". Oh well, neither explains the "one montuno" you used that defies everything. Good luck with your future stories. Cheers.

I love your stories because they read so true. I am not going to say the obvious but if you are writing for you only no need to proof read but if you are writing for all of us readers then go the extra step and reread it before you post. Again you are good writer and thank you..

Fantastic story, nice twist to a nasty story.

all i can say is it was HOT

Sehr geil, danke

Hi, thank you for writing this story. I don't mind the typos or grammar as some of the other readers pointed out as long as the story warms me, it did! <m>