All Comments on 'The AMFOP'

Wow, that was one of the hottest stories I have ever read! It took a while to get started, but the way they broke down her defenses, her hot big tits, the sexy spanking, making her beg for it and finally fucking her properly. Wow, that was great! Please write more stories.

Wow… nine pages of non consent and you managed to write this shit on your own? No help from your masters and their big black cocks?. Wow u mast have recovered from your ADHD!

"Gluck gluck gluck gluck."...That's the sound of this awful and stupid story drowning in the sewage...Must be written by someone like SS (Slob Slim) who envies and hate all young and happy people! Why? Because even when young he was SS!

Just awful as the score indicates

I think it needs a second chapter

Way over rated by voters.

What a rambling hopeless story - and still not finished!!

good story

Whoa. Super hot story. Almost made me late to work trying to read a few more paragraphs. Lol. Hopefully more to come soon.

Very hot story! hoping for a part two. Would enjoy seeing Amy getting used and loving it. Even Mark could be grateful that the awakening will benefit him also. Impressive descriptions of her changing into a hot slut.

Wow, really great story. Definitely going to go back to this one more than once.

Looking forward to more like this!

Wow! I’ve read nothing like this. What a ride! Total male fantasy and feminist nightmare.

I am so looking forward to find out what Slim and Doug do to Amy. Thank you for the kind words about The Work of Art. Feedback from other authors is truly meaningful.

I can't wait for the sequel to 'My wife's big mouth'. But I really want to get the follow up to this with Slim and Doug having their fun too