by annag98
I try to let Anna do her work without saying anything or interfering but I wanted to say that I love this story so much and this is her best so far
thank you babe love you
I'll get you for that sometime, Anna. Don't know how, don't know when... Usual excellent performance. One small error (typo?): "...my agent Karen...bugging me to get an agent..." Should have been PA surely? If you were a mediocre writer I'd hardly have bothered to mention that but because you're so good it stood out like a beacon. Okay, today's nit-picking over. Enjoyed the chapter as always---onward and upward!
"Just perfect"... "best so far"... I totally agree with jodiep's comments! Once again, Anna, you have excelled yourself in erotic narrative, emotional impact, and just plain excellent writing!
And indeed, after your ominous Pt. 05 postscript, you have scored a "gotcha" into the bargain!
Thank you again for a marvellous and totally delicious read!
Maribelxxxxx
That was such a beautiful way for them to be reunited. Made me smile and tear :)
...when you do it so beautifully and so felicitously!
After your PS to Pt. 05 I started reading in trepidation, but that soon melted away in the delight of the lovely happy reunion you narrate so exquisitely! Gorgeous writing as always (not just the erotic bits, though those make me melt with delight...), deft weaving of different strands in the narrative, perfectly modulated dialogue... couldn't ask for more...
...except: yes, more of this wonderful story, please!
Veroxxxxx
PS I too think Jodie is right that this is the best you've done!
Yes well and truly had but I should have guessed something from your comment in chat last night. I had almost decided I wasn't going to read anymore of The Angel but I am so glad I did. It was sheer joy to see you reunited and I don't have to tell you what happened. I agree with the other comments, this is the best of yours I have read so far.
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Being loved with heart and soul is the greatest gift
Gotcha!?! 😕
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Hallo Anna!
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Queen Jackie and I both know what it's like being away from the love of your life, and the feeling I get when I'm picking-up Jackie at the airport is unbelievable..
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About the "Gotcha", oh yeah Love, you sure did! 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms. ... Danke! 😘
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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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