All Comments on 'The Anointing'

Five stars doesn't do it justice. A beautiful and and tender story. Such deep emotion. Thank you.

A most interesting approach! I'll have to see if there's a sequel, of a woman anointing a virgin man.

Quirky story! Maybe some day “sex-ed” will become a laboratory course. If so, the world might be a better place. (Not holding my breath.)

Astonishingly well-written and conceived, especially for a FIRST STORY!!! Better than 95% of the other stuff on Lit. Please keep writing!

wonderful .. very touching and provocative

Beautiful story.

Two minor typos in an otherwise perfect story. There is a missing (pronoun) "I" and a missing "r" (you should be your). How refreshing to find an author who knows the terms "vulva," "vagina," and "penis." Well done!

Enlightening, all of us would be much better off if our parents would have given us real sex education. instead, most of us were just thrown into it, and had to sink or swim.Great piece.