All Comments on 'The Apartment Complex'

Kind of s stupid story.

No, check that - Dumb

Really loved the story hopefully there are more chapters.

but needs to be more passionate and less clinical.

Also, get a proofreader - near the beginning you used the word 'withering' when I think you meant 'writhing'. In sexual situations, they have 2 *very* different meanings. And one of those is not good, lol.

Still, if there are going to be sequels, it has some potential to be a very good series (especially since most of your previous work is very good.) Looking forward to it.

Very good reading. Don't listen to the comment about it being dumb. I have been following you since you started to write, you have come a long way and I greatly enjoy reading your stories. I do agree that you do need to get a proofreader, some mistakes, but still a very good story.