All Comments on 'The Apartment Search'

Wow. Very hot story

Well done!

What a shot story

Really enjoyed this thoughtfully crafted story.

Appreciate your creative mind and all your efforts.

Thank you.

Loved that it was both short and yet layered with so many details that I could really picture it all. Keep writing these stories please!

I liked the set-up, establishing his need. You showed him getting horny and hornier. The "choice" he made wasn't much of a choice, though. And he was hardly consensual outside of that leverage, until he wanted to cum, that is. I definitely see the reasons you categorized this as BDSM -she was dominating, there was the equipment. It was, even at the end, just a tad too Reluctant to feel like safe, sane & consensual BDSM.

I rated this 5 stars for the effort and the effect it produced. I'm probably trying to gild the lily. Please write more.