All Comments on 'The Archipelago Pt. 01'

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Interesting Start

An interesting start to the story. Good build up and interesting characters. Looking forward to more chapters and to see where we go. Good storytelling. Thanks for writing this. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very goog history,It's a pity that there is no sequel

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This story used to be posted as a complete writing and it was very good. Apparently there has been censorship at work and all but this first chapter has been removed.

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All of my inglorious imperfection … tangled, twisted, and dizzy. careening from emotion to emotion like corners and choices in a maze. wants, needs, desires, and urges collide splinter and melt together with surprising and bewildering results. Coming apart utterly at the se...