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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
THANK YOU

Very sexy! This could easily be a much longer more detailed story or even series of stories. I liked the way he started off in control and ultimately left control up to her. I give it 5 stars.

windblownx10windblownx10about 12 years agoAuthor
Much appreciated

Thanks Anonymous, this is my first submission, pun intended. I have others I am working on and hopefully they will get accepted as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
enjoyed the story

windblownx10 nice story, I enjoyed the flow. They can always have additional work done, maybe a photo session with a female photographer...3 some...

windblownx10windblownx10about 12 years agoAuthor
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I welcome any feedback to make these stories something you could get off to. I am working on a follow up so feel free to comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
No warning

Should've warned about the gay shit -- 1 star

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After many years in the corporate world, and being paid to write corporate crap, I am now doing what I love, writing erotica. I hope some of my readers find it enjoyable; while not meaning to offend anyone, I do like to push the boundaries just a bit.