by BluePill
SO. FUCKING. LOVELY. And HOT. Can’t wait for the next installment!!!
What a great love story and the HOT sex didn't hurt either. I couldn't read this fast enough and am sure I will be reading it again, and again, and again...
WOW. THAT IS HOT. I DIDN'T MAKE IT THROUGH THE WHOLE THING WITHOUT KNOCKING ON OFF. AND EATING IT TOO.
Fantastic. A beautiful story. The sex scenes are so graphic and detailed. I am excited about the fact that Craig and Paul have finally acknowledged that their lust has developed into a great affection. The kiss was so hot and passionate.
What an amazing, sensual, heartwarming , hot aF story. I hope that you can find the time to write again, because you’re damn good !
In the previous chapter, I commented that I wanted to hear more of their straight-flexible journey, busting internal barriers, before I saw this Chapter 2. This got even better as self-imposed societal taboos were broken with moments of bravery and acceptance. This can go further into that realm that scares many gay men and regular people: authenticity, intimacy, and vulnerability. Eeewwww, scary territory. These guys just broke that barrier that many hide behind and just want to fuck 'n go. Not many examples and models to go by. [off my soap box]
Do they foster that opening with more steps into the unknown?
Hey can we have another chapter in this story please?? Really into these characters and how this story progresses post-lockdown.
All the build up paid off. Amazing how one kiss can change the all dinamic of a relationship and expand the concept of lust versus desire and emotional connection. Amazing! If there's no more i am content with this beautiful ending. 🧡
What I like the best about this story is how the dom/sub roles shift back and forth to build a more equal and loving relationship than is normally related in this type of story. The only scene I did not like was Craig cumming all over Paul's face. That shows disrespect and a wish to humiliate the partner. It is a lovely story overall and very well written.
Excellent! A similar story readers of this one might enjoy is "A Favor" by BluePill. I always appreciate recommendations.