All Comments on 'The Arrangment'

A little bit extreme towards the end. Maybe you should have had her forced to be naked a bit more.

But, overall... one of the best here. File -> Save As!

Thank you.

Maybe a little (too) unbelievable at the end, but still a great read!

Wish you hadn't spelt 'semen' as 'seaman' though!

It was a good read, but like others, I felt it went over the top towards the end. The first half was great though.

A bit extreme the ending, but other than that you are awesome, as usual. Thank you for your time and effort. I'm already impatient to read the next one.

-Onkana

I was reading this story after searching up a few keywords and absolutely enjoyed it. Once I finished, I checked who the author was because I only have a few favorite authors (yourself included) and had a laugh when it turned out this fantastic story was written by you. Your work really stands out and I eagerly await the next one!

Good story idea. Found the money amounts in the beginning unrealistically high.

Agreed the end was over the top.

Still a good read.

Surprised she got a relatively happy ending. It doesn't sound like any of this affected her too much.

I hoped this would run longer. Certainly the roulette wheel section deserved more. Very hot and inventive.

Please add newer versions. This plot is just brilliant

Okay, that was an AWESOME story. Great job.

A brilliant idea and an incredible execution. You might've gone a bit over the top in the end, but I'm not complaining. ;-)

fantastic idea, loved this any chance of similar would be greatly received,

This one still remains my favourite of the lot.

Brilliant idea that is well executed. Definitely have a peek at the rest of your stories.