All Comments on 'The Art Model'

OMG you need an Editor very badly!!!!! Very many incorrectly used words. ie Danny was basically laughter of Why don't we take thinks slow. You must be using talk to text. Or English isn't your mother tongue. The story was so so. The grammar errors made it barely readable.

DragonRider55

Don't pay attention to "DragonRider55"s "helpful" critique. I thought it was pretty good, certainly readable, few errors but well done overall. Story was cute.

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WTF

I need a story surrounding Danny, he might be closeted. xD

OMG, I just LOVED this tale! Really! The tension, the nervousness, the climax climb. Thinking about translate your story to my mother tonge, portuguese... If I do that, I bring you the portuguese version of this masterpiece!!! Of course I'll read you other stories.