All Comments on 'The Art of Bathing'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

This is a good one! If there would be a sequel in the future, it would read it for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Pls continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

So so good. Write more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More, more, more

we want more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Cave sex

Good setup to Suspend belief about Tim’s innocence and Got into the fantasy when Knight appears. Arousal from there to end. Liked use of charged words. Continue with this couple, maybe Tim or Knight bring a friend? Handy7.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fave pairing

This and the 2nd chapter are some of my favorite fits on this site no lie. I've come back to them multiple times! Love this pairing and looking forward to more!

SeakinkletsSeakinkletsalmost 3 years ago

Technically yes, he kinda can't consent. That said, there is NO way someone can have a penis for 20 years and not know what an erection is, not know what masturbation is, amd not know what cum is. He didnt jack off, and had NO wet dreams? The premise is so inherently ridiculous that despite me hating stories that fetishize rape I had no qualms because this can literally only ever be a fantasy. There is no human being that exists like this, without them being carefully abused and manipulated their whole life. The whole thing ended up being funny with how innocent he is, quite enjoyable tbqh.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is like... My favorite fics ever posted here. God I wish you'd write more of these two, so fucking hot

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