All Comments on 'The Artifact Ch. 02'

I liked both of then very much. I was a out to score you a five stars rating and noticed it said thank you for your vote and I could not change it please continue the story I like it

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this has been one of my favorite stories yet on literotica. loving it. Keep up the good work.

Please write more of this awesome tale. Love the way you have merged the sex into the story line just enough to remind me it's a piece of erotica but not so much that it's not also a great story....and not so little that it's just a story with some great sex in it.

CHARLIE MIKE

Your story is very beautiful and well composed!

Please keep going!

You have a wonderful gift, please keep sharing

this tale would be very good even without the sex.

this story would be very good even without the sex.

5 stars

Ch. 03 here I come.

I agree with the other fellow, this is a good story even without the sex. I am becoming a little saddened as I approach this last chapter. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and knowing that the end is approaching is a bummer. It would be nice to see this story line continue perhaps in another add on story. Keep it perpetuating like Harry Potter with more adventures. I'd say to pitch this story without the sex to a publisher and see whether they would print it out as a continuing series. Great work, so far.

No matter how satisfying sex is I always need to be satisfied again, or is it just me.

Now we have adversaries lining up to battle for good and evil, I wonder if the girls will have a part to play. Highlander ! Rocked...

I like the story and appreciate the blend of sex and story well done.

A good blend of sex and story !! I feel it could use a tad more sex , you are great in skill at telling this tale. I am looking forward to many sequels to this !

Your story has some sex, and alot of plot. I like it. Keep up the good work.

I like the story... Please continue...

Excellent premise ,great empathy. Five stars.

I like the plot and the sex! I thank you for sharing this,

Immensely enjoying the story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to continuing the adventure

It's good, very good