by el_uno77
Premise with possibilities.
But not delivering anything much at all.
Sex happens too abruptly. Too fast.
She plays with his cock. Nothing about how it feels. Nothing about how she's enjoying it. They go to the bedroom. They get naked. He goes down on her. She gets into 69 position and licks his ass. That's it. No details.
Two stars -- being generous.
Short and sweet, I like the quick play by plays sometimes. Would love to read about more women into ass licking l!
Intriguing
The scenario is provocative, and could have turned into a lovely tale with a little more care and teasing out of details. As it is, raw and immediate, so many questions emerge: the woman from HR, her nature and previous connection, the hint of more, and we know not nearly enough about the (lucky) protagonist. Intriguing indeed.