All Comments on 'The Audit Ch. 02'

by SandmanNC

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good job

Keep this line of story coming. Maybe you could have a chapter from her point of view.

marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
That was another good chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like the way you described the domination between the auditor and the girl. The sex scene was a good one. I hope you read more about him taking her anal virginity in the future.

jleetechiejleetechieover 15 years ago
too easy on her

Maybe, just maybe if more enslavement takes place...collar, leash, chains, piercing...this could be one hot story.

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