The Autumn War Vol. 04: Succession

Epic story. I am awed by your talent. I wanted to be a writer but clearly I don't have your abilities. I am the best at proofreading and found a few mistakes. For those who read the comments I'm not trying to tear him down, I LOVED this story and am amazed at how few errors there were.

Drop the "e" and add " ing" does not apply with the word singe. You get singing which isn't what you wanted. Maybe you should have just said burning.

I am the best proofreader in any universe! Lol

I have to read all of your stories now! Awesome.

WOW! What a great story line. Very well written. Will be reading more of your work soon.

Two alien species sex scene! Strangely arousing. Great world full of stories you've created. Thank you.

Please Sir, I'd like to have more.

How about follow up stories about Jade and Evan on Jarilo? Raising a family, their kids being 3/4ths human would be really great. Fletcher and Xipa? Hernandez and Tatzi? We already know that they could have kittens...

id say amazing, but that word doesnt do your writing justice. power reading all your stories i may be addicted and ive read ALOT of sci fi over the last 40 yrs..

Fist class epic, your writing skills are just exceptional. I thought you wouldn’t be able to surpass you first bug epic but you have done so in style without a doubt. Thank you for sharing

Truly a epic story in length and scope, well done. I wish I could go on about the strengths of this epic novel, but it would condemn me to 50 pages. I am not that good of a writer, so like most critics I will just point out a flaw or two.

Evan in most of his scenes seemed to be an observer more than a participant. It really took away from action and danger.

There where other small plot holes that occurred that was distracting, but not that important. Like when you had fletcher arm himself with the laser, due to his injuries. You pointed out that he he gave away his ammo, then having him share his ammo again.

Your strategy on the whole was bang on, but your tactics was a little weak in places.

But dang, really great job.

Really glad you kept the politics subtle, hate it when authors feel the need to hit the readers over the head with a 50lb message.

What a great story. Just as good if not better than ‘The Rask Rebellion’. And that is by far one of my favorites. I’m not sure about others but I’d love to get this story in one package compared to four pieces. I love a looooong story compared to shorter iterations. Thank you for another wonderful story in the world of the UNN and the coalition. I hope they keep coming. My personal favorites of this story was Evan and Jade and Ensi and Flecher.

Thanks and congratulations for a really magnificent series. I liked everything about it - the pacing, the characters, the vivid descriptions, the actions, the sex - really couldn't put it down. well done.

Great story and an excellent read. Thanks for writing it!

Nice!

Well done. I really enjoy reading stories like this that have so much depth. Its the Sci Fi adventure that doesn't include sex scenes every page. You get to know the characters and personalities, and there's a ton of dialog. I'll be looking out for another...when you have the time. 👍