All Comments on 'The Awakening'

Continue ...So much potential !!

One awesome story thatso needs to be continued....... Please

Jean

from the land down under

Enjoyed it very much

Sorry, I really tried to get into this but you lost me early on. Jamie, having a low sperm count, would not cause multiple miscarriages over a period of 18 months. Likewise, it would hardly make the pregnancy dangerous for her unless she was the one that had the problem.

That just stuck with me and, though I tried, I could not get back into it.

Very good read. i like how the story is developing and all the detail that you put into it. thank you for sharing your talents and i hope the second part comes out soon.