by masterofnymphoslut
i loved all wonderful 13 chapters. I would give anything to be Jean or Denise's place.
I find as i read this that I need what they are getting.
too bad this story wasnt illustrated with photos of these gorgeous women
I enjoyed this story very much.I am very glad that Hank really assessed the situation between himself and Jean and determined not to overly complicate there growing relationship.
Nicely done. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future
Loved the whole story except the ending. I feel like you left us hanging. What about the resolution with Ed? And Sid? What about Hank and Jean moving? I hate when details are left out. At least one more chapter would be great (or many more) to tie up the loose ends. Keep writing and I will keep reading!!
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I loved all of them. Plan on reading all your others as well!
My Dom recommended I read it. Like a Dom can really recommend anything to his sub that she would not go out of her way to do. 😀. Anyway I came over and over and over again. I know why he liked it what man or Dom wouldn’t. Jean and I have so much in common both of us are insatiable submissive sluts. I know people don’t really think we exist except in a fantasy world but for some real lucky men we are the prize. I like the fact the Dom understands the gift and how loving and protective he is while pushing both of them in their relationship. Loved it.
Good chapter as was the whole story but just felt this was a rushed conclusion with Denise being almost bundled off with Jerry to conclude the stortline. There are so many threads left unanswered.