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by Tara Cox

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
missing emotion

For a first time story, it missed the conversation, you did have the jitters & nerves, but readers didn't see that much except for the condom part. More than just thoughts, some detail but the feeling of missing depth of sone level.

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