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April601April601about 2 years ago

Well written…enjoyable

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

Really? Bob and Carol, Ted and Alice? The 1969 movie? Really good story, though.

kingswedekingswedeabout 2 years ago

I can see this going on for many a chapter with both families involved.

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineabout 2 years ago

Very hot story, arousing. Did you have it proof read for mistakes? In the paragraph where you described the characters, you referred to Carol as Carol Perkins instead of Carol Jenkins. But was a goid story. .

parputter69parputter69about 2 years ago

Glad to see you submitting stories again. This needs to continue with Beth’s parents joining in.

JSA69JSA69over 1 year ago

I agree with the other commenters. This story needs to be continued. Great stuff!

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I've been writing since about 1995 and have never until I submitted a few stories to Literotica in 2002 had anyone read anything I've written. I have been absolutely astonished beyond words at the response to my stuff. I write from the sordid depths of my imagination, secret...