by TryAnything
I agree with the other commenters. This story needs to be continued. Great stuff!
Glad to see you submitting stories again. This needs to continue with Beth’s parents joining in.
Very hot story, arousing. Did you have it proof read for mistakes? In the paragraph where you described the characters, you referred to Carol as Carol Perkins instead of Carol Jenkins. But was a goid story. .
Really? Bob and Carol, Ted and Alice? The 1969 movie? Really good story, though.