All Comments on 'The Babysitter's Cam Page Ch. 04'

The story as a whole received 5 stars from me. This chapter I only gave 3 stars, it seemed rushed as well as the dialog seemed a little off almost like teenagers. I do hope you give us more stories. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Pappasleaze!

Really liked hope for more

All excellent. More please?

Well, you said that this was the ending for the three but it could be a few chapters more. You could leave it with a loving threesome with Kelsey still babysitting the kids but still working on the cam. You could have all three filling in from time to time on the cam stage with people telling them to do certain sexual acts with each other. You could have them playing with each other in public with the possibility of them being found out. There are so many options to go on from here. Hopefully you could offer a couple of alternative endings?

Very good... thank you for your work.