All Comments on 'The Bachelorette Party Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nicely paced 😁

wiscman45wiscman45about 1 year ago

Nice and slow and a believable pace and how thing might go in a situation as presented here. Does Debbie want to call and continue things with Linda?

O2O2about 1 year agoAuthor

Wiscman, all five chapters have been written, and are waiting for the moderators to approve them. You'll have to wait and see what happens.

lazy_readerlazy_readerabout 1 year ago

A nice, slow tease. Just enough to show where this is going and keep me interested. The hints about Susan suggest that she may follow her mother's path.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 1 year ago

i really like this, soft slow and so erotic. part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

hot! 5 stars!

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