All Comments on 'The Bachelorette's Secret Ch. 01'

I already hate Ronnie, and I'm Team Steve all the way! Nice start!!!

I really like it so far. I just hope we get more physical descriptions of everyone. I'm a visual reader so imagining the characters helps me get more involved. Great as usual though! Can't wait for the next update.

You're such a great writer. York work is original and the story unfolds and flows nicely. Very well written. I love the protagonists too! Thanks for making the heroine likeable- which is a rarity! Please continue the brilliance. You've got something special here.

Clare