All Comments on 'The Backup Plan'

Great story, well written. Hope there are more chapters.

Superb - one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. I hope there will be more from this setting.

So erotic ! I hope Chapter 2 of the series will come soon . Would there be any connection to Mandy ?

As always, another brilliant story! I can’t wait for what’s next. Thank you!

Great story!

As always a great story again. I didn't see the connection with the rest of them, but it's some time since I red them. If I'd prefer something differently, that would be for the story to be longer. I'd like some incidents to be more detailed than just mentions. Like Natalie's seductive dance that Myriam filmed in their first date, or about the pictures that she was sending her. Checking to see if any of the neighbours had seen her from the open curtains. The end with Isaac being Myriam's boyfriend was kind of obvious. So the biggest pleasure was the building before that and I'd preferred it longer. After all, I really enjoy your writing and I enjoy both your description of the events, but also those of the inner thoughts of the characters and their feelings. That's what makes your stories special. That the protagonists are realistic and you can actually care and connect with them. I'd like to see more about Natalie and even more, I'd love to see more of Mandy ! But generally, I'm glad that you are back and posting again. Thank you for the great work.

So devious! What a hot story and so glad you are back!!!